Grammatical edits to the manual's introduction.

Message ID 543F83E6.9010803@pacific.net
State Superseded
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Rical Jasan Oct. 16, 2014, 8:37 a.m. UTC
  Addresses issues with grammar in the Introduction chapter of the
manual for the sake of both clarity and consistency with the rest of
the manual.

    * manual/creature.texi: Edit grammar for clarity and consistency.
    * manual/intro.texi: Likewise.


2014-10-11  Rical Jasan  <redacted>

	* manual/creature.texi (Creature Nest Macros): Edit grammar for
	clarity and consistency.
	* manual/intro.text (Introduction): Likewise.
  

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diff --git a/manual/creature.texi b/manual/creature.texi
index 3c68616..adf171a 100644
--- a/manual/creature.texi
+++ b/manual/creature.texi
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@  This system exists to allow the library to conform to multiple standards.
 Although the different standards are often described as supersets of each
 other, they are usually incompatible because larger standards require
 functions with names that smaller ones reserve to the user program.  This
-is not mere pedantry --- it has been a problem in practice.  For instance,
+is not mere pedantry---it has been a problem in practice.  For instance,
 some non-GNU programs define functions named @code{getline} that have
 nothing to do with this library's @code{getline}.  They would not be
 compilable if all features were enabled indiscriminately.
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@  Single Unix Specification, @w{version 2}.
 @comment (NONE)
 @comment X/Open
 @defvr Macro _LARGEFILE_SOURCE
-If this macro is defined some extra functions are available which
+If this macro is defined, some extra functions are available which
 rectify a few shortcomings in all previous standards.  Specifically,
 the functions @code{fseeko} and @code{ftello} are available.  Without
 these functions the difference between the @w{ISO C} interface
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@  types like @code{off_t} have a size of @w{32 bits} on @w{32 bit}
 systems.
 
 If the macro is defined to the value @code{64}, the large file interface
-replaces the old interface.  I.e., the functions are not made available
+replaces the old interface---i.e., the functions are not made available
 under different names (as they are with @code{_LARGEFILE64_SOURCE}).
 Instead the old function names now reference the new functions, e.g., a
 call to @code{fseeko} now indeed calls @code{fseeko64}.
diff --git a/manual/intro.texi b/manual/intro.texi
index a1708ef..d68d4cd 100644
--- a/manual/intro.texi
+++ b/manual/intro.texi
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@  portability.
 
 @menu
 * Getting Started::             What this manual is for and how to use it.
-* Standards and Portability::   Standards and sources upon which the GNU
-                                 C library is based.
+* Standards and Portability::   Standards and sources upon which
+                                 @theglibc{} is based.
 * Using the Library::           Some practical uses for the library.
 * Roadmap to the Manual::       Overview of the remaining chapters in
                                  this manual.
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@  is based upon.  These sources include the @w{ISO C} and
 POSIX standards, and the System V and Berkeley Unix implementations.
 
 The primary focus of this manual is to tell you how to make effective
-use of the @glibcadj{} facilities.  But if you are concerned about
+use of the @glibcadj{} facilities.  If you are concerned about
 making your programs compatible with these standards, or portable to
 operating systems other than GNU, this can affect how you use the
 library.  This section gives you an overview of these standards, so that
@@ -185,14 +185,14 @@  pattern matching facilities (@pxref{Pattern Matching}).
 @cindex POSIX Safety Concepts
 
 This manual documents various safety properties of @glibcadj{}
-functions, in lines that follow their prototypes and look like:
+functions in lines that follow their prototypes and look like:
 
 @indent
 @sampsafety{@prelim{}@mtsafe{}@assafe{}@acsafe{}}
 
 The properties are assessed according to the criteria set forth in the
-POSIX standard for such safety contexts as Thread-, Async-Signal- and
-Async-Cancel- -Safety.  Intuitive definitions of these properties,
+POSIX standard for such safety contexts as Thread-, Async-Signal-, and
+Async-Cancel-Safe.  Intuitive definitions of these properties,
 attempting to capture the meaning of the standard definitions, follow.
 
 @itemize @bullet
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@  save their original values, and restore them before returning.
 @cindex AC-Safe
 @cindex Async-Cancel-Safe
 @code{AC-Safe} or Async-Cancel-Safe functions are safe to call when
-asynchronous cancellation is enabled.  AC in AC-Safe stands for
+asynchronous cancellation is enabled.  AC, in AC-Safe, stands for
 Asynchronous Cancellation.
 
 The POSIX standard defines only three functions to be AC-Safe, namely
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@  the environment encountered is internally inconsistent.
 @cindex Async-Signal-Unsafe
 @cindex AC-Unsafe
 @cindex Async-Cancel-Unsafe
-@code{MT-Unsafe}, @code{AS-Unsafe}, @code{AC-Unsafe} functions are not
+@code{MT-Unsafe}, @code{AS-Unsafe}, and @code{AC-Unsafe} functions are not
 safe to call within the safety contexts described above.  Calling them
 within such contexts invokes undefined behavior.
 
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@  those that perform implicit locking on @code{FILE} streams by default
 will not, even though the implicit locking may be disabled on a
 per-stream basis.
 
-In either case, we will not regard as MT-Unsafe functions that may
+In either case, we will not regard functions as MT-Unsafe that may
 access user-supplied objects in unsafe ways should users fail to ensure
 the accesses are well defined.  The notion prevails that users are
 expected to safeguard against data races any user-supplied objects that
@@ -629,7 +629,7 @@  use in asynchronous signals remains undefined.
 @item @code{sig}
 @cindex sig
 
-Functions marked with @code{sig} as a MT-Safety issue (that implies an
+Functions marked with @code{sig} as an MT-Safety issue (that implies an
 identical AS-Safety issue, omitted for brevity) may temporarily install
 a signal handler for internal purposes, which may interfere with other
 uses of the signal, identified after a colon.
@@ -840,14 +840,14 @@  threads or within asynchronous signal or cancellation handlers.
 This is not enough of a reason to mark so-marked functions as MT- or
 AS-Unsafe, but when this behavior is optional (e.g., @code{nftw} with
 @code{FTW_CHDIR}), avoiding the option may be a good alternative to
-using full pathnames or file descriptor-relative (e.g. @code{openat})
+using full pathnames or file descriptor-relative (e.g., @code{openat})
 system calls.
 
 
 @item @code{!posix}
 @cindex !posix
 
-This remark, as an MT-, AS- or AC-Safety note to a function, indicates
+This remark, as an MT-, AS-, or AC-Safety note to a function, indicates
 the safety status of the function is known to differ from the specified
 status in the POSIX standard.  For example, POSIX does not require a
 function to be Safe, but our implementation is, or vice-versa.
@@ -861,16 +861,16 @@  the corresponding functions.
 @cindex :identifier
 
 Annotations may sometimes be followed by identifiers, intended to group
-several functions that e.g. access the data structures in an unsafe way,
-as in @code{race} and @code{const}, or to provide more specific
-information, such as naming a signal in a function marked with
+several functions that, for example, access the data structures in an
+unsafe way, as in @code{race} and @code{const}, or to provide more
+specific information, such as naming a signal in a function marked with
 @code{sig}.  It is envisioned that it may be applied to @code{lock} and
 @code{corrupt} as well in the future.
 
 In most cases, the identifier will name a set of functions, but it may
 name global objects or function arguments, or identifiable properties or
 logical components associated with them, with a notation such as
-e.g. @code{:buf(arg)} to denote a buffer associated with the argument
+@code{:buf(arg)} to denote a buffer associated with the argument
 @var{arg}, or @code{:tcattr(fd)} to denote the terminal attributes of a
 file descriptor @var{fd}.
 
@@ -884,8 +884,8 @@  context.
 @cindex /condition
 
 Some safety annotations may be conditional, in that they only apply if a
-boolean expression involving arguments, global variables or even the
-underlying kernel evaluates evaluates to true.  Such conditions as
+boolean expression involving arguments, global variables, or even the
+underlying kernel evaluates to true.  Such conditions as
 @code{/hurd} or @code{/!linux!bsd} indicate the preceding marker only
 applies when the underlying kernel is the HURD, or when it is neither
 Linux nor a BSD kernel, respectively.  @code{/!ps} and
@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@  The additions on top of POSIX are mainly derived from functionality
 available in @w{System V} and BSD systems.  Some of the really bad
 mistakes in @w{System V} systems were corrected, though.  Since
 fulfilling the XPG standard with the Unix extensions is a
-precondition for getting the Unix brand chances are good that the
+precondition for getting the Unix brand, chances are good that the
 functionality is available on commercial systems.
 
 
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@  variable or says what a function does.)
 
 In order to use the facilities in @theglibc{}, you should be sure
 that your program source files include the appropriate header files.
-This is so that the compiler has declarations of these facilities
+This is so the compiler has declarations of these facilities
 available and can correctly process references to them.  Once your
 program has been compiled, the linker resolves these references to
 the actual definitions provided in the archive file.
@@ -1176,11 +1176,11 @@  to treat these as built-in parts of the language.
 
 In addition to the names documented in this manual, reserved names
 include all external identifiers (global functions and variables) that
-begin with an underscore (@samp{_}) and all identifiers regardless of
-use that begin with either two underscores or an underscore followed by
-a capital letter are reserved names.  This is so that the library and
-header files can define functions, variables, and macros for internal
-purposes without risk of conflict with names in user programs.
+begin with an underscore (@samp{_}) and all identifiers that begin
+with either two underscores or an underscore followed by a capital
+letter.  This is so the library and header files can define functions,
+variables, and macros for internal purposes without risk of conflict
+with names in user programs.
 
 Some additional classes of identifier names are reserved for future
 extensions to the C language or the POSIX.1 environment.  While using these
@@ -1228,7 +1228,7 @@  Names that end with @samp{_t} are reserved for additional type names.
 @end itemize
 
 In addition, some individual header files reserve names beyond
-those that they actually define.  You only need to worry about these
+those they actually define.  You only need to worry about these
 restrictions if your program includes that particular header file.
 
 @itemize @bullet